beMoved
6.16.2010
you be you
and
i’ll be me
and
we can all live and love together
happy and free
Life doesn’t happen
when we are thinking it through
and
plotting
and
planning
what we should do
Let the music play
let is seep into your soul
and
what will be
will be
it’s all beyond our control
it’s all beyond our control
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this poem has such a good feel about it.
love the refrain at the end…keep dancing…
i concur with you!
a very good poem!!!
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wwooww.. that was so lyrical.. i cud jus hum it in a tune 😀
and yes life is not about plotting and planning its about LIVING and not EXISTING… 🙂
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//it’s all beyond our control//
this though sometimes make me relax … very beautifully penned….
well written.
This poem made me smile.
Sounds like a song– nice!
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whatever will be will be, the future’s not ours to see…
i really like this poem. simply yet truthful.
Lovely form, rythm, style and theme. Well done.
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this is very important….
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“Que sera sera” definitely brought back this song that my mom sang to me when I was very much younger…nicely done!
I was bemoved and bemused by your awesome poem…
Joanny
This is just an amazing piece of creation… I remember a quotation I read sometime back “If I plan and it works, then it is my plan . But if I plan and it doesn’t work then it is His plan.”
Beautiful.. 🙂
wow… is nice to read!! simple and elegant!!!
Well done, this is how I feel to. Everyone should be themselves and I hope that everyone can find who they are 🙂